Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

u had better personals gunit lacked em u both had good structure ur vocab killed his ur rhymes scheme was more complex then his his lines were simple flowing and corny he attempted to use wordplay and fail
gunit work on vocab rhyme scheme and personal
mista work on shortening ur lines theyre kinda stretched and get more personals in there btu u win for coming a little more basic better personals and a more complex rhyme scheme