Voted For: girlmerkinu

easy battle

imagery- GMU, ok imagary. i can see wut u r sayin and i can feel the opression. so good job. KKKH, bad imagery, wuznt feelin there at all.
vocab- GMU, u won this becuz u kept it comin, KKKH, u would have got this, but u fell off in the end
structure- GMU, easy one, decent structure, KKKH, work on ya structure.
flow- GMU, your vocab and structure helped it flow better. KKKH, fell of way too many times, work on it.
originality- GMU, not much but there wuz more than KKKH. KKKH, u had it, but yet agin u fell off.

GMU, overall pretty good for ya first topical. increase ya vocab, and overall just keep elevatin.

KKKH, u need to work on everything. U came out decent, but ultimately fell off, work on structure mostly, and everythin else.

No Hate Just An Honest Vote

v/girlmerkinu

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