that poem was a lil to deep for me...I could picture myself in there cuz it was so real....It went str8 to the story or topic or w.e and made its point...Structure was aight..to tell ya da truth i was gettin a lil bored at the towards da end...Overall it was pretty good..Just fix the structure up and ryhme a lila nd mix the closer up a lil sit would be great.....

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FREE AGENT

Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......