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9th Degree
I Say You Got This Coz Of Vocabulary And Punches, WordPlay,Your Vocabulary Was Decent, Some Nice Shit Hommie, Your WordPlay Wow, Reaaaly Decent Mang, Punches Was Here And Was Hitting,I Did Not Feel The Closer Though, But It Was A Decent Verse Over All,The Opener Was A Good Part Of This Verse, Not Only Coz That Punch But Coz It Was Like The Best Bar In Here, I Saw Better From You, Multiple Rhymes Need To Be Added Here
Jim Crow
Wow, Just Coz You Had "" Does Not Make It WordPlay Mang Not Every Thing In This Verse Was Decent, The Structure Was Fucked Here, You Need To Fix That, The Punches Was Hitting Hard Though, Vocabulary Was Simple Here, You Also Need To CHange That, Basicly That's What Held You Back In This Battle, Close Battle Really I Did This On Structure Vocabulary And Punches
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