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Old 12-23-04, 05:12 AM   #6
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Kordozar
Nice Work Vocabulary Was Decent, Structure Was Kinf Of Off, Dont Sepertae Your Bars, And Try Not To Make Your Lines Stretched It Looks Weird,Punches Was There Came On Target, Word Play Nicely Used, Played Over Personals, Some Thing You Need To Work On Is Metas, And Structure, Up You Vocabulary A Little And It'll Be Good

DustDogg
Like I Told Kordozar, DOnt Sperate The Bars, We're Nit Illiterate, Any Way You had Some Nice Personals Played Of His Name SOmeThing I Find Intresting, I Like The Pronounce Line Well Done, Unfortunatly Your Vocab Was Weak Here, Personals Was The Best Thing Here, No Punches Was A Match In This Battle, Get Multi's And Meta's In Here, And You'll Be A Decent Emcee

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