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Old 12-23-04, 06:55 AM   #7
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Voted For: Ill.Bill

Marv, I Need Vaxanation, Coz I Just Put My Foot-In-Ya-Mouth.
The Digits On Ya Name Depict Ya Ranking, Ya Not Climbing,Ya Plummetin South!
Not too bad, structure off a little. Punch landed 6/10
You Fucking Stink, Coz Even Ya Own verse Needs Deodorant.
Marv Cant Hold Out, Hes a Sentimental Fool, Thats y He 'sang 4 the moment'.
Structure off again but there is apttern so your not losing marks for that. Good use of metas and good personal punch that landed 7/10
Face It Noone Likes You, Your Mom Shoulda Just Abort.
You Still Think You Ill? Just Coz Of The Ass Crack You Snort?
Nice. I liked this, good meta, hard punch, funny as fuck!! 8/10
New To Rv...Well Imma Flush Your Career Down The Drain.
Quicker Than Martin Bashir, Demoralised MJ's Fuckin Fame.
Pretty good, personal, not bad punch 6/10
Now That May Be Played^.But Ya Verse Is Bound To Be Trash.
Marvs The Opposite Of Rain Man = Incapable Of Doing The Math.
Very good playing wiv him here. meta use superb 8/10

35/50 70%



da name jay n im so sick,ill.bill's trash dis lame i just dont get
he madd cuzz i meet his "half" sista n gave her my "whole" dick
Good wordplay, hard punch. Good opener 7/10
no girls know how ya penis taste,so u dont shit bout bein str8
"ill.bill" datz whut all da bitches say when see ya face.....lol
Good but could av been better. 5/10
so dont bleieve dis homo when he fukkin say he sick......
he dumb he da only 1 i know dat gota "stand" up da "babi-sit"
Not very good actually. Maybe i dont get it but this is weak. 4/10
from now when i throw a pucnh at ya bitch you stay silent...
look at ya record lol only "W" u eva got was a "wu tang album"
Where is the rhyme????? Only reason you get marks for this is cos its quite funny. 4/10
u got guns? punk spray me!,now i see dat son crazee......
rv is ya life fam u keep da "net on ya head" like "lunch lady's"
This is much more like it. Fucking quality closer!!! 9/10

29/50 58%

Overall you do the maths. Sorry marve. Wasnt bad but lost it in the middle.

Well done Ill Bill, good win and good verse.
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