Voted For: Elusiv G

REALISTIK: I liked your apporach on the topic... Flow was fine.. Structure.. fine.. but it wasnt very imaginitive..kinda like.. I was expecting everything that happened to happen.. no surprises or shit..

Acuity:
Ya shit was deeper.. more descriptive.. I liked it.. It was somethin we can all relate to.. we've all had close friends.. maybe not that particular situation but its easily imagined.. Flow was on throughout.. structure was neat and easy to read..

my only advice would be to type properly mostly.. dont say like "da" and "dere" shit like that.. cos it makes good lyrics sound dumb.. You hear mainstream cats do it.. but theyre all wack.. so be intelligent

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