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Voted For: Coopa Bang
aight dis was a close battle.....not great but close so here's how i scored it.
punchlines: both of u had a few, tha best 1 was on da last line of Ike's verse, but coopa bang came wit more and his made better sense.
flow: ok Ike had better structure, even tho that last line was a stretch. some of coopa's lines was squeezed 2 less than 3 words while others took up a whole line which really didn't flow well.
vocab: both of u ATTEMPTED 2 use good vocab, but still u should elevate it. illegible and impecable were good 1's 2 and they rhymed. i dont see where lifespan rhymed with tha 9th line tho on coop's behalf.
personals: this is where i think coop won it because he generally came at Ike harder. what else is there 2 say?
winner= coopa bang
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