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Old 12-23-04, 01:40 PM   #15
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Voted For: kkkhater

ur is that u scared of guns or u have no aim...
cus the only time i see K's from u is in ur name...
ur the herb kind-Ill have u missin and gone bitch...
The way u settle wit those rhymes make pilgrims wanna migrate on it...
i'll even buy a casket fo u-no matter the cost...
cuz ur just a poor sport-like Tiger Woods playin ring toss...
ur raps never had a chance especially when u heard mine...
Been knockin ur head fo so long,
...ur brains pushin fo a 'please dont disturb' sign...
^^^^^^^^^^^EH ELEVATE ON PUNCHES FAM. GOOD FLOW BUT NO PERSONALS I SEEK. BUT THE PUNCHES WERE WACK AND TOO BASIC. ELEVATE



Yo I you have already got you're second lost in dis rap,
you'ew lyrics are a discrace, if rap had a face it just got slapped,
You're sn soots you're work very well wisdom,
all you have to do is try to make up a rhym witch I just shit em,
my rhymes are gonna tear at ya for I hate all newbies,
for they are all annoying me like goddam snoopie,
why you graspin the mike,
for you're white ass aint nothin but a god dam dike!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ SERIOUSLY BOTH OF YOU NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES. FLOW GOOD PERSONAL WHICH U NEED TO HAVE IN BATTLES. THE PUNCHES WERE WACK, BUT U HAD SOME THAT HIT HARDER THAN WISDOM SO I VOTE FOR YOU FOR HARDER PUNCHES, BUT ELEVATE THROUGHOUT.
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