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Old 12-23-04, 02:04 PM   #22
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Mista
Aiight Nive Verse, Your Structure Was There, Along With your Vocabulary Good Work, Rhyme Scheme Pretty Decent, Punches And Personals Is What Won This Battle You Had Some Decent Shit Here, WOrd Play Was Used Well, Over All This Was A Good Verse......9/10

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Not Far, But Not Close, Your Verse Was Kind Of Weak, Played Punches, Was Un Use Full Your Vocabulary Needs To Be Upped, Get Some Word Play In Your Verse, Personals Would Of Done It But Wasn't Hard Enough, Meta's Was Decent Over All You Need Work On Harder Punches.....7/10

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