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Voted For: Chaos
Zeke:
ok first of all you need to work on wordplay alot more...your punchlines were kinda weak but they werent to bad...they were ight ok...try using less vocab you use to much it throws the flow off...o and the flow was throwen off as i said...stucture your stucture was not to bad coulda been better...no hate pz
Choas:
not the est ive seen from you but your wordplay was there...and your punchlines were there...the stucture was weak coulda been way better...your punchlines were mad there...flow was pretty good..and you used vocab in most spots where it was needed...nice peice..pz
no hate VOTE: Choas
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