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Old 12-23-04, 07:10 PM   #8
Parallel
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xcell
hmmm pretty decent...not the greatest ive seen on rv lol pretty godd stucture and flow but you came pretty damn weak on the wordplay and punchlines in fact you didnt even use punchlines or wordplay in your verse...sry but to be honest you need elevation...no hate pz

X-Spitty
not bad probably one of the best ive seen from you in a text battle but you need to work more on using punchlines more on a consistant bases you used them but you need to use them more and wordplay i didnt see anything to great there...not bad tho keep trying...pz

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return the favour in one of the battles in my sig...thanks
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