sup man....since i cant vote i will give you feedback...pretty nice structure and all...still got alot of imagination huh...atleas you aint saying rimes like ''me'' and '' me '' lol anyway i didnt really like the opening...didnt rime but that line about:
Fuck it you always pull a “fancy-pants” and grab children Anyway
Like an “illusionist” to are planet, & wears “short shorts”, How Gay

it was my favorite one..