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Old 12-23-04, 08:33 PM   #34
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Voted For: intensify effect

Jesus...both of yall need to work on your structure, like try to keep it even and all. both of yall had some stretched lines, but I voted for IE for having lines that rhyme. and please dont put numbers in between each bar IE, thats herbish.

but breaking shit down:

Psyco: I don't know what is this, but I can't read anything, horrible structure with horrible punches, and that shit with the beat change is wack, this is text, ain't no one gonna hear that shit, it's played.

IE: you ain't no newb, but you do need some elevation though. punches are decent, but work on your structure a bit, your lines were too stretched, need to work on that.

overall I voted for IE with harder hitting punches

ps could yall please return the vote in my link, thanks!
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