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Old 12-23-04, 11:09 PM   #15
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

ok battle....not bad not bad


Personals-Parralell,you didn't really "diss-him" you kinda just talked shit....its ok...but not what i was lookin for.....any wayz......Wicked you had some decent personals...i mean wit the gap line and a few others...

Punches-Ok Parallel you didn't really have punches it was pretty weak coming from "you" but w/e lol....and Wicked clown you had the harder hittin punches wit the Garth Brooks line thats what got this category....

Vocab-Ok both of your vocab was "eehh" you know it was shit i hear all the time when i battle some of the basic emcees at my school...but its all good....and Parallel you need to up like a muh fucka in this department..

Enjoyments-Ok i enjoyed Wickeds more..it was more complex and not as boring and played as yours parallel.....i mean this was not the best battle i've heard but it was "OK" and i'd have to say that Wicked came harder....

Overall-Overall Wicked took this one in my opinion...he had harder hittin personals and punches...his shit was more on topic.....and didn't go all over........

notes:Parallel you need to up on most aspects like Vocab and Multies and Punches....Wicked all i'd need too see from you is some more multies and maybe a lil bit better vocab....

overall it was an ok battle...big ups too both...pzz ~1~
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