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Old 12-24-04, 12:10 AM   #1
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From: Trenton 609|look me up bitch
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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

ok ok It was a very good and close battle
it actually came down really to like whats between the lines if you no what i mean.
Wicked: definally a nice verse with a good flow and nice style. The rhyme scheme was definally on the whole time. however i heard a few played out lines and the rhyme were kind of simple. but i did see so mults in there that worked well. You did say faggot alot so i guess some parts got streched. Now there were some good punches and some bad ones: i mean i ain't feeling the rattle one. The personal were there: even though you kept calling him a faggot. I like your word play. overall i think you could have done better but still raw. 7.5/10

Parallel: you also had a nice flow and a very nice style. You also had a good rhyme scheme the whole time and i think that your rhymes were... well more complex. I saw less mults from you but it still sound pretty good when i did it. but i found alot of your punches were like just grapsing for straws they were kinda wack and one bad punch can fuck up a whole verse so.... as for personals you had some that werre good a creative but overall lacing something. also i don't understand why you put some things in bold. 6/10
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