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Old 12-23-04, 11:30 PM   #9
Scareface
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Voted For: Cuban~Storm

Wow umm Ill Take The Time to Give A Detailed explanation on This Battle

Trojan
To Start off with You Id like To Say you Structure Was the first thing That I saw That was jus Fucked Up.....Then I Read Ya Verse and at the beggining It had A Decent flow but then At The End You wont rymin and it seems like you were jus tryin to talk and not rap,,,,,,,umm Basically You need to work On Ya Style all Over Bcuz you Seriously Fucked this verse Up
No Hate Mayne Jus Speakin My opinion

Cuban~Storm
I Liked ya verse and I Like the way You Held That Same Rythm and Flow Throught The whole verse ...I didnt See any Flaws with your Punchez and Personals Bcuz they Are Str8.....Um The only Thing i can Say Is Try to Work On Multi's But Thats Not No Big problem when Ya Got a Verse like your but thats What i Say you Were Missing So.....There.

Please Take The Time To RTF In My battle ..I Only have One Battle And I Think It Wouldnt Hurt You To RTF Thanx
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