Voted For: Kordozar

This battle wasnt hard to pick a winner at all...

Killa Trix: Looks like your new here so maybe I will show you a few things. First off, try to fix your structure because to me it looks as tho you have written 10 poor lines althought the line requirements say 8 lines in the rules. But anyways, se how Kordozar wrote his...try that out in your next battle and you will find it is alot more organized and easier to read. Next, up your vocab a bit...your lyrics werre elementary in this battle, dont be afraid to replace a word with a larger word with the same meaning, if you need help with that stuff, there are many online dictionarys/thresaurus' that could help you. And finally...try using metas and multies, I see you tried to a little bit but they just hurt you more than your opponent. For these reasons that I just helped you elevate in, is why you are not getting my vote today, but no hate dawg, I wanna see you do well so please, take my advice, nice effort.

Kordozar: You did pretty good. Got my vote anyways because you had a better structure, harder punches/personals, and nice metas. But I always like helping ppl to improve their game's so heres yours...You had several spelling errors in your verse. Maybe re-read it before you post, or if you need help, paste it into MS Word and have it spell checked for you. Next, Your vocab could also use a little help, Like I said to Trix, don't hesitate to replace a word for a larger word - It actually makes yourself sound more intelligent. But other than those things I thought you did excellent...You have my vote, but only if you return the favour below...

Trix = 3/10 Kordozar = 7.5/10

RETURN THE FAVOUR - I GAVE AN HOUNEST VOTE FOR YOU, PLEASE DO THE SAME....http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=166008