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Old 12-24-04, 10:56 AM   #9
hang-man
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From: RV Pit-Bull Dont Fuck With ME!!
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Fuckin joke'll get smoked, and for his skill i'm still searchin'
cus if J had a dime for every time he came ill - he'd be a virgin
decent not bad

weak he's the worst in Queens, kid's equipped with piss poor spits
the only time i'd peep Marv's cuts - is if they're were on his wrists
ok

bitch is geek reaks of ass, doubt he knows how to win
n if his verse looks like crap - its' cus i scared the shit out of em'
decent

sit down you simp, how can you fend, for yourself you smell of herb
Marv'll make Rv proud when he drops...off the face of the earth
ha preety good made me laugh really

a waste of my words the gay's merked, wack that he raps is strange
so i gave Mj a penny for his thoughts - and still got back change
could of been a better ending not a strong finish but it was ok a few good bars a few decent 7.0


i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's..
u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"*
decent

stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells
u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12".....
ha im feeling that good word-play N all soild

look at 1 of george post if u wanna c da sloppyest fukk ryhme
fukk ya "crew" fag 2 mags a leave ya "body.above ya.mind"...
good play off hes crew name which make is a personal

ima slump dis chump...he's gay he like men da touch his butt
a "straw" n "sex" describes ya skillz cuzz you "fuckin-suck".....
ha good one

your goin da b my 1st example ima b deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like "air" when it drop cuzz it a "neva be touched"
decent meta and a better ending
u had a couple of more better bars plus u had a personal and a decent meta and diss thats why i think u edge it out here nice battle ya'll it was a good read