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Old 12-24-04, 12:27 PM   #14
Wickedclown
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aight this shit is...well... ONE SIDED AS FUCK.............break down right here:

Xcell- ya shit needs some elevation dawg... no hate but ya strucure is awfull, rhyme scheme is bad, punches and personals were nonexistant..... vocab was childish.... shit was just bad dawg... dont really need more of an explination than that... fix it homie or ya gonna lose some battles... 1/10

Xspitty- ya shit was pretty good, u didnt need much to beat him but ya structure needs a little work, lose the ... after every line it screws up flow... even ya lines out more too... punches were good as were personals so props on that, vocab was good, your elevating well.....good drop 5/10

all in all one sided... no hate Xcell but elevate dawg.... big time.....

VOTE-Xspitty.......................................