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Old 12-24-04, 01:16 PM   #10
M&rk
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This was feedback posted for ~Lady Fiya~

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neither ya;ll had much of pimpin wordplay beside, those play-toh line, filya line,- both in ya'lls first bars
so, they were both pretty equal, so i gotta give it to filya for the rest of the verse.
she had some more personals,(that weren't made up)
also some of her metaphors were decent punches.
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ko’s lie n ur past, punches don’t happen like self-afflict wounds on manikins
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short battle, ya'll should put harder punches in it, and j-poll u didn't try nothin in your battle. filya actually tried.........
ya'll return wit an honest vote. PLEAES. LINK IN MY SIG.
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well i can't vote but return wit some feedback anyway in my battle. one
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