you better crit my shit foo...


ahem..

the flow was a bit off..but didn't effect anything..so its good text flow..
the wordplay was coo..and It seemed like a freestyle..braggin punchlines..etc..
It didn't bore me..and It actually had me leaving a crit..so it must be good

7.9/10

it coulda been an 8 if u didn't change your name...

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