This is a rap I wrote to my gurl for Christmas...Tell me what yall think PLEASE!! I really need to know before Xmas (tomorrow) Thanx..

This not-a-lie, lately, you've been on-my-mind
The truth-is, a friend like you-is, hard-to-find
Helped me walk-when-blind, let me know when I crossed-a-line
An angel-true, that helped me make-it-thru, the hardest-times
A star-that-shined, its hard-but-I want-you-to-feel-this
No gimmicks-shit, ya friendship-is, one-in-a-million
Believe-it-it's-true, you a queen, I can see the genius-in-you
And I wrote-this-rap, to show-you-that, I'm thinking-of-you
This girls-my-queen, she means more than the world-to-me
And a world, without her, just isn't the world-for-me
Helped me learn-to-see, with an ass, that'll SLUR-YA-SPEECH!
Told me not to get-high, because I'd get-by, with her-with-me
I'm in love-with-you, this love-is-true, this queen-is-mine
Forever's-a-pact, walk to heaven-and-back, to see-you-smile
The love-of-my-life, the woman that I want-as-my-wife
I'd leave-the-Earth to NEVER see-you-hurt, just wanna be loving-you-right

Tell me what yall think! I need some feed before I give this to my gurl...Thanx and Happy Holidays yall...1

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