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Old 12-24-04, 09:01 PM   #28
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Voted For: Kordozar

hahahaha,
this was a pretty good text battle!!

Chaos: I've seen alot better, no offense but your verse wasn't really that good.

I'll Break Ya Spine-And Get You Inline.....Quick!!.....
Cuz Your Linez Are More Crooked-Then R-Rated DICK!!!!.....

That is the best line in your verse man!!! sorry it is..
You had kinda long line's which i don't like. And some of the words barelly even rhymed man.


Kordozar: Your verse was pretty good, the only part i didn't like was the first bar!! I didn't rhyme at all! LOL.. but anyway's, you had nice and very creative lines!!

This Fake Thug,Lives A Life Of Dream House And Matchbox..
Tha Onli Hip Hop He'll Do Iss Playin As Tha 76ers Mascot..

my favorite one!! ^^ lmao, it made me hella laugh, very nice!! and good metaphor!!

Vote: Kordozar
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