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Old 12-24-04, 09:08 PM   #18
Dabatos
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Voted For: Chaos

This battle sucked!!

Chaos: Your verse was wack again man!! 2 many verses are wack that i've read of yours!! lol.. j/p.. but yea, your structure was very bad, especially your flow man!! But there we're 2 bars from your verse i really liked..

I'll Blow Ya Brains-Out...And Lie Them Down At Ya Stadium!...
Me Losing This Match-Is Like USA Losing Against The Canadians!!.....
Lmao good one

and

You Style's Cheap-Your Not Elevating This Way!!.....
Like Cheap Mom's On Christmas Day-You Got Ya Style Off Ebay!!!.....

lol, very original!!

Rising Sun: Dude! It seemed like you mostly worked on multi's then actually dissing him??Your multi's we're alrite, but anyone can do that, it's the punch you really gotta work on, you should also work on some metaphors which I really recommend you do!! Your best line is:

As I stomp-this-fag with more punches than a rocky-match
“Tuck you away” cause you “stink” like big league hockey-bags

and that bar was still kinda wack, due to hockey bags?? It's like trying to dis on someone else sayin you smell like gym socks!! Really old, but good job and much props on the multi's..

Vote: Chaos
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