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Old 12-25-04, 12:15 AM   #20
Dabatos
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this was a okay battle:

X-Pitty: Nice punche's, I even though some of them really didn't rhyme that well, i like it, unlike other people's verse's, they are slmost all the same, You have alot of potetial in you man, just keep writting. Try elevating in your vocab and rhyme's basiclly, everything else is good..

excell: Hey man, your verse had actually some good vocabulary, but your punchlines we're very bad, your saying stuff he has no chance and he'll end up in a ambulance, but didn't say why!! Basiclly try to get personals on him like how he dissed your sig, try to dis him like that.. Also your structure and flow was very off.. elevate on what i sed.. but good job..

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