Voted For: anxiety

Aiight..

Anxiety:

Dope verse through and through.. your imagery was basically flawless i seen no mistakes at all in your verse imagery-wise.. Vocab was also pretty good, could have been better but then again everyone's vocab could be better... flow was on point for most of the verse... you consistently stayed on topic.. and i liked the sequence of events... good wordplay and depth dope piece

fave lines:

He cant, he wants to quit drugs, he says that he's had it...
But after like a minute he knows he cant kick the habit...
So almost daily its the same scene, him smokin his meth...
Pipe up to his mouth, inhale and start holdin his breath...

just sickness evolved^^

overall : 9/10

lady~fiya:

aiight.. your verse was also pretty dope... imagery definately better than anxietys but he got you in flow, wordplay, and consistency... your verse was alot harder to follow which means either its real complex or not written as well as it could have been and i think it's a mixture of the two.. some of the lines were stretched too much and you could have shortened the lines with unnecessary words. basically you had a good verse and alot more than i expected from you but it didnt stand up to anx's verse

fave lines :

I stand beside my husband as he stretches his arm to caress my casket
Already a “has been”, he drops 2 distinct roses, the deep hole grasps it

that was probably the best wordplay in this battle and good flow but it was only one dope bar of wordplay and flow the rest was average

overall : 8/10

vote: anxiety

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