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Old 12-25-04, 01:37 PM   #18
Detrimental
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Voted For: Def by Mouf

onesided battle seriously
Def you had a nice ass verse......not only good structure but punches were ill....it flowed really good.....i mean just everything looked like it hit how you wanted it to.....keep the shit up

rippin/blessing....you aint bad but you need yo elevate.....a lot.....he knocked your cookie jar off the table LMAO....i mean not a bad verse but you can work on everything.....no hate.....keep the shit up....

v/Def
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