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Old 12-25-04, 03:16 PM   #20
Recluse
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Voted For: led poetic

this was a good battle altogether....

LED:again your piece was nice...i liked your structure it was dope...you story line was good....and vocab was great.....and a good flow...nice piece overall....overall:9/10
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4fil:you had a good piece to..i liked your strucutre....you had a pretty good story line....but the only thing that threw you off was your flow...it wasn't there...and wasn't really feeling it...good piece from both....overall:8/10
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