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Old 12-25-04, 06:20 PM   #3
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Voted For: Melancholy

dame homie u merked this kid ya rhymes were tight as fuck ure flow was a lil off but still good punches and personals hit hard like a mother fucker there could of have been a few more metas but it was still a very good verse
best line-This battle is finished...you shaky so I'ma call you a skippy man...
"This kid is straight gangsta...he comes from Yippie Land!"
u had an ight verse but nothing really specill ure flow was good punches didnt really hit hard ure structre was a lil off but still tight rhymes were kinda basic but i think u still had a good verse
best line-no he's not a idiot...he's just a amature who's also plain queer
Melancholy's incompetence's a inspiration to herbs everywhere
return the favor...
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