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Old 12-25-04, 09:40 PM   #3
Recluse
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both had nice pieces...good job to both
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LE:your structure was alsome....you had good vocab..nice flow....nice story line...and all-around really good piece overall:9/10
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Kon:i like your piece also...you had a good flow and a nice story line...but what threw you off was ya strucutre...it killed you....in my opinon,....and your effort felt weak...overall:8/10


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