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Old 12-26-04, 01:34 AM   #4
Coopa Bang
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ok battle

X ok structure...Flow i thought was fallin off a lil and den on and den gettin off but overall good....Punches where aight could of reworded them betta and made dem harder...Vocab was nice and so was ya multis..and had a pretty good personal at da beginning...

Hang Man...you bitchass tryed to you this verse on me in free agent forum you donkey ass fuka...Ok back on topic..sloppy structure stretched it out a lil to much...flow was ok...punches where certified WEAK....vocab was nice...multis your lackin...same with personals...

^^elavate sum more hang man before some merks you bad enuff that youll HANG ya self MAN.....oh shit that one line was betta than ya whole verse fam

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Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......