~SAINT SINNER~
From: Sindicate City, U.S.A. |
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Voted For: Yeska
young...
ill give you all the time you need, you'll prolly pre-write,
this kid acting and thinkin he black, well he's white,
^^^not feelin' it. sorry.
imma murk you easy in 6 lines flat, you say "fuck a rookie"
your master's here and imma bout to crumble a cookie,
^^^nice try...but no. pretty played concept.
yeska's your name, being bummed and bullied is your aim,
ive got the glock locked, dont think i wont shoot, im insane.
^^^nope.
yes...
Number one, yeskas tired of textee's that know dick..
Illest ever..? Dude you here since august with no wins..
^^^ok. could've hit harder though.
I run rings, around little shits........And the games on..
Young-un? Nah, this dickhead just spelt his name wrong..
^^^simple...but effective.
I'm aimed on, findin why you aint made a big splash pal..
You know ya nobody, even YOU blacked ya name out..
^^^nice concept.
my vote would most definately have to go to yeska. both verses could have been better, no hate. you guys got down...but it seems like y'all rushed this and wasnt really trying. young...work on your punches, metas, personals and vocab bruh, that should help you up your game some. yes...fine tune your punches/personals more and try to clean up your rhyme words. dont get me wrong....i think they work...but i've seen cats get voted against for not using words that sound 100% exactly alike. both of you battlecats continue to hold it down, ai-ight??? i look forward to seeing more from you two in the future. one.
...the super...
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