God is a Fable.
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Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~
Anxiety... your verse was good... your flow was on point... your structure was good... your emotion was there but i wasnt feeling it that much.... imagery was strong and i really liked it,.... you stayed on topic for the most part and didnt really drift off at all... nice verse
Lady... Your verese was also good,... your stanzas was really on point and none drifted from the topic.... your emotion was strong in this and your imagery was amazing... very nice piece... i give this to you
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