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From: Sindicate City, U.S.A. |
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Voted For: Black Queen
devist...
your verse was cool and mildly entertaining. no hate, but i felt you could have come at her way harder then you did. no sweat. try to work on your personals and punches. throw some multies in there too to spike your work up....i think it helps. your structure was on point.....nice. keep up the good work pimp.
queen...
you outclassed the kid in this battle. your multies, punches, and personals were on point. plus you threw in some nice vocab to spice up your piece some. the only thing that you need to work on is your structure...other then that, your good. nice job. hold it down.
one.
s.v.............c.s.
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