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Old 12-26-04, 07:50 PM   #14
Acuity
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Voted For: Skriptz

no one notice ya ill and i know you're hopin to kill-
Vote: Skriptz

no one notice ya ill and i know you're hopin to kill-
but Im like too much charcoal-put a hole in ya grill-
meh...ok opener....not a punch tho - 7/10
i'm laughing at you cuz ya suck, i aint kiddin this cat-
i saw ya girls b-day wishlist she wants her virginity back-
wasted filler considerin its only 6line battle...was funny tho - 6.5/10
ya dumb and my tech bombs emcees - and ya flex son
cuz Skripts is like mail - he always comes with address on-
nice original closer, dis was ur best bar man - 8/10[B]

I got to hand it to u being that whack takes serious dedication
Your rhymes wouldn’t be monitored closely...
……………………………..if u were a crack head on probation
[B]humour, originality and it was a punch, gd opener - 8/10

Knock your punches out the way like I put a door near your fists
Midgets like Gary Coleman you still fall short for these spits
ok filler, nuttin gr8, but effective nonetheless - 7/10
The only way your going spit good is if you got a speech impediment
Listen to your slur, create a spinal tap so I can make your tendons hit
mad vocab nicely placed. gd wordplay and concept of punch, nice closer - 8.5/10
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