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Old 12-26-04, 09:05 PM   #17
Acuity
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Voted For: Black Queen

Vote: Black Queen

Eclipse:--work on creativity , less dick suckin crap, ok structure, come wit mo elvated punches and wordplay man..elevate..overall - 5/10

B.Queen

your structure was shit girl..work on that...and get rid of the lines at the end of each bar..makes u look amateur



hey yo.. clispe would be "Insane-to-Show" similar to CRAZY ACTORS/
Cuz I'm dropping punchlines you "Can't-Throw-Back" just as Re-Tired Catchers/
ok opener, gd creativity - 7.5/10
You must be DYSLEXIC.."you'll-never-learn", it amazes me why you try to Rival/
You couldn't BLESS ME with a Verse even if you "Bit-From-The -Bible"/
this is played as fuck..but ok filler...-6/10
Your Life's on the Shelf, against me you have NO PRESENCE(presents) like "Un-employed" elfs/
Wouldn't be Suprised to see you "Eating your own Flesh" cuz you "FULL-OF-YOURSELF"/
nice diss & a lilbit of wordplay - gd punch - 7.5/10
This Battle must be AMBIDEXTROUS......I guess it's Ready to "Switch Hands"/
Roped ya entire Neck and Hung you just so you could be "ABLE-TO-HANG".... man/
likin tha ambidextrous line that shit was nice girl and original and finished wid a punch -9/10
You could enscribe ya Verse on ya Fore-Head and still not be able to make "Head-Lines"//
Compare you to Busta Rhyme's aerobix instructor the way you try to "STRETCH-RHYME'S"//
nice humour in dis bar and an ok punch aswell..-8/10
While you have "Cyber Sex" with EXTACY.......my "RAPID TONGUE" is ceasing ya Battle Cries/
My "HI-TEK" lyrics draw "PRAIZ" "IN-SITE'S", now you Realize facing me wasn't wise/
shouldnt hav finished wit self glorification but it was an ok closer......-7/10

Return the favour on my battle wit Wack Methods/J.Rabbit - Links in sig....
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