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Old 12-26-04, 09:07 PM   #18
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Voted For: Black Queen

she killed you...ROYALLY hahahaha!

Since i always start with tha weakest, HERES GOES ecplispe, yo rhyming needs help. you structure was good, but alotta yo lines seemd unfinished, or like they needed more syllables...even if these verse were in audio, she wouldve merked u...yo flows was aight, but ur rhyming was simple...not too many punches in there that caught my eye either, so u should work on that...and ur all around flow...
Black Queenyo verse murdered him from all angles...ur punches merked him...had me droppin my jaw, u got madd skills-werd..yo first bar took him in my opinion. and ur structure was soo perfect...just at tha beginning, one of ur bars was stretched, so u should work on that, but other than that, u took him with punches...and mettas,, nuff said
overallthis was completely one-sided...he didnt come remotely close to taking this...she killed him from tha start...

PLZ RETURN THA VOTE ON BATTLE IN SIG....PLZ


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