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Voted For: oreo
Oreo
Alright Mang, Your Verse Was Creative, You Used His Personals And Played A Little Of His Name, Your Vocabulary Was Pretty Decent, And Had Some Good Punchlines In This Verse, But Your Structure Fell Of Toward The Ending And, You Didn't Have Much Mult's In Your Verse, You Had Some Meta's In Here, But It Wasn't Much, You Need Some Work On Your Multi's Meta's, Structure And Some Vocabulary, Over All You Had This Battle Over CreativeNess, And Punches
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Damn This Was A Hard Decision, But You Verse Was As Well As Oreo's Verse, Punches Was Decent I Liked Most Of It, You Had Some Multi's In Here That Was Good, Meta's Nicely Done, You Was A Bit Creative But Not Much, Vocabulary Was Decent, Always Come With Some Fresh Vocabulary,Some Lines Was Kind Of Played But Others Made Up For It, Your WordPlay Came Better Then Oreo's And If This Was Based On That You Would Of Won This, Your Structure Lined Up That Was Another Good Thing About Your Verse, Also The Fact That, You Used A Good Opener Was Decent But Closer Wasn't Feeling It Over All This Was A Close Battle....Parallel I Know You Can Do Better Mang
Vote=Oreo
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