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Old 12-26-04, 11:02 PM   #19
Parallel
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Voted For: Virtue

both came hot but i gtg go with V on this check it out

L.E
ok i liked your verse i liked how you came with some tight vocabulary and some ok wordplays in there....some pretty tight metaphores....pretty witty i tell you...but you didnt really creat a picture for me as virtue did...you need to work on staying with 1 idea then you would make a picture..i have the same problem lol no hate

Virture:
ok i liked your vocabulary but your stucture lacked but it was ok and decent...you used some nice plays in there...i like how you used some good flow with your metas and multis....and i also liked how you created me a picture and stayed on one thing of the topic it was pretty great...keep it up..no hate to both pz..

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