ok dabatos good story more of a topical then anything the story was very plain and vocab wasnt really used anywheres near the extent it couldve been used it lacked creativity here it basically went on what everybody wouldve wrote about this topic blind rage the visualie was ok but the story moved way to fast no hate but i wasnt really feeling your piece

george i dont know who the fuck you are but good drop vocab was used effectivly and you said so much more about blind rage then the averge wouldve seen you stayed on topic but made the topic all that more vast very creative here and thats what i like cuz only satan understands plans to command without thinking first that line right there means so much its crazy dope good drop

vote-george

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