Voted For: Chaos

Chaos Sounds Like I Cee At Tha Circus..
You Attempt To Spit But Ya Sign Says Out Of Service..
I'll Leave My Mark On Your Rekord With Lyrical Scriptures..
Cus You Beatin Me Is Imaginative Like Disney Pictures..
Your Skill Is Like Retards In Math Tryin Ta Solve Intergers..
I Flipped Tha Swith On This Bitch Puttin Him Out Like Light Fixtures..
^^^^^^^^^^^^Aight i like this part good punches nice lil wordplay in there put some personals though.



Like Hydraulics Ill Have You Bouncing Down Tha Street..
Cus When I Grab Tha Mic I Help Out Tha Beat..
Theas No Rythm In This Gangsta Like Snoop Cd..
Hes Life Iss Based On What He Cees On Tv..
You Insests Fag Your Ya Brothers Lover..
I Fucked Your Mother In Ya Household Im Known As A MotherFucker..
Mentally Im Crossin Him Over Like Tha Proffesor And Hot Sauce..
This Uncooked Weiner Will Never Make It Ta Bieng Hot Dog..

^^^Naw fam, punches on this part, didnt do really good fam, wordplay was good, but no personals, punches were kinda weak on this part.



If "Game" Wasnt His Dad Killin A Crip He Wouldnt Inherit..
I'll Eat Of This Cracker Like A Italian Parrot..
Hommie Get Abused 4rm Tha Verbals,Duckin Like Turtals..
Leave You Shakin More Than A Jello Commercial..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Lol. nice closer, overall this verse had some up and downs.



I'll Rip And Dismantle Ya Whole Crew-And whip All Of You With Belts!!.....
Cuz This Kid Is So Wack-He Had To Get A Couple Winz....OFF HIMSELF.....
I'm Suprised!!-This Bitch Should Have Been Caught!!......,.
Like His Crew-All The Admins And mods Are Falling Apart!!.....
Your Not Dope Enough To Roll With The Best Crew!!.....
The Only Reason We Called You Out-Is Cuz We Had Nothing Better TO DO!!.....
^^^^^^^^^^^ ILL WORDPLAY AND PUNCHES AND NICE PERSONALS





You And Your Whole Crew-Is The Fucking Wack Attack!!!.....
Like Nerds Trying To Forget About Science-This Kid Needs To Forget About Rap!.....
And While You And Your Crew-Is Trying To Figure What Happened!.....
M.A.B Will Be Watching-And Like Carson Droping A Good Verse-We'll Be Laughing!!.......
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^O aight fam, nice punches, good wordplay, and nice personals




overall=zeke you got an good verse, with punches and flow, lil wordplay going on in there, but you didnt had personals, as for the punches it werent really hard hitting, your verse was kinda on balance (had some up's and downs). Chaos, you had an good verse.Nice punches and ill wordplay fam, personals too. Elevate on struture fam, dont use CAPITALS in your verse. i Give this too chaos overall better punches and personals, zeke sorry fam, but your punches wasnt really hard hitting as his, plus he had wordplay's and personals too. Flow definetly goes to Zeke,But the punches and personals, wordplay really goes to chaos.


Choas elevate on struture.

Zeke- elevate on using personals, punches.



PEACE

Chaos RTF

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