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Old 12-27-04, 07:38 PM   #21
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Voted For: Virtue

first off, i liked both topicals...

i was feeling this portion from LE
walk in my door...my dad looks to me and says... "Your grades can be better..."
...Great, that's all I really need...some more shit to add to the suicide letter
My phone's ringtone sets off...the possibility of pain stalking like a panther...
...My mom's hurtful words spread like cancer...why did I really have to answer?

I was feeling Limited's stand point on this battle, but the content of virtue's verse was better.. virtue i feel u used a lot of unnecessary vocab.. but u got ur point across.. your imagery was very good.. Limited's was sumthin people could relate to yet, yours was more detailed and the imagery grabbed my attention..

good luck, to both you.. i see y'all two can be my competition in topicals.. hee hee

v/ Virtue

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