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Old 12-27-04, 10:11 PM   #9
J~FOUR
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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Black~Magic:

Shit Was On Point. Decent Punches.. You Had Alot of Two Word Multies, Tryin Making Them To Three And Four.. You Took The Punch And Multie Category As Well As Alot Of Others.. Good Verse By You..

Lil D: Your Verse Was Really Plain, No Complexity Or Good Punches.. Also Your Flow Was Off Because Of Your Syllable Markings.. Fix Your Structure So Its Easier To Read..

Gain Decent Job By Both..


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