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Voted For: Assas-Sin
Assas-Sin
Nice Verse, Some Decent Vocabulary In Here, Punches Was Hitting Kind Of Hard, Structure Was Fucked Up Though, Lol, And You Need To Throw Some Multi's Up In Here With Some Meta's, WordPlay Wasn't To Well, That Will Need Elivation On
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Coz, Your Punches Wasn't Hitting Verry Hard, Vocabulary Was Basic, WordPlay Was Alright, Throw In Some Multi's You'll Be Good Need More Work On Your Meta's And Shit Though...Over All Both You Need To Still Elivate But It Was Decent For A Newbie Battle
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