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Voted For: Assas-Sin
Ok Shit 4rm Tha Both Of You Black Ya Shit Wass Good So Wass AssAsIn But AssAsIn Verse Had Betta Punches,Good Personals Fix Ya Strukture And Both You Up Ya Vokab..................
Black Ya Verse Lacked Decent Punches Ah Mean Tha 1st 2 Lines Wass Good But Ended Off Bad Have Good Punches Throught That Whole Verse Ya Strukture Wass Kool Easy Ta Read Have Some Good Vokab Cus And Some Good Ass Personals...............
/V AssAssIn
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