Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
open:Marve: "u dumb! 4 now stupid is ya name,i'll put da ruga 2 ya brain.....
no deal "mario bros." is da only time we'll c "coopa in da game"
-Very nice, a little better than the other opener. Good use of his name.
close:Marve:"ya time is up...fam whut can i say ya ryhmes just suck...
if i rob u i'd feel like "cops at da vibe awards" i wont "find a buck"
-Good meta, good use of recent events. Funny as fuck. -True badboy
Marve's best line:"if u do i bet u da deal is wack.....cuzz nobody feel a ya raps.
u'll neva be "big" in rap umm maybe just "guerilla black"...."
-This is fucking sweet. Proving real talent there. Multi rhyming, metaphor use and hard punch!! Very clever.
Coopa's:"You beatin me is like hiddin footage NEVER BEFORE SEEN
Ill smack you like a bitch you are and make you like fat joe to lean"
-In my opinion this was your best line, and your only one on Marve's level in htis battle. Nice use of metas and good punch
Overall: Marve's punches were far funnier and harder hitting. His use of multis, personals and metaphors were untouchable in this verse.
Well done Marve, real good verse
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