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Old 12-28-04, 03:14 PM   #23
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im thinkin this was SUPPOSED to be a topical so yeh
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you actually did the topic so yeah thats the only reason you get my vote

lawless-yeh you musta not known this was a topical battle kid........it was stated to obvious in the setup so i dont blame you for missin seeing it.........but yeh it was a topical about getting car jacked so uh you only lose cuz you did a battle verse and not the topic................
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