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This was feedback posted for Konqlusion.
IP:
okay this was a good battle but i felt konqlusion came harder with vocab and imagry
kon-aight you had very good vocab..........you had a good storyline..............conveyed the topic clear...............good flow...........this topic really didnt have emotion but more a i guess hardness to the point for the topic..........you did that good......good structure and imagry was good.........
overall 8/10
c-bo-aight u had a good storyline and you conveyed the topic realy well but your vocab was decent cuz you had some but not much............you had good flow..........imagry was there..........structure was consistant even tho it went over to the next line each line pretty much stayed even.........but it does kinda throw off the look of the structure........you had the hardness pretty good........but i just wasnt feeling your verse as much as kon's...........just up your vocab and work on not stretchin your lines as much.....
overall 6/10
v/konqlusion if i could vote....
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