i can barely hear ya hook....first verse...ok...u are so unemotional that it causes pain in my groin area...i couldnt really pick out a "hot line" or something that made me say oOo..second verse...ok...still nothing to make me lift my head and wake up...bust nuts in ya eyes lines is played....third verse...ok...his quality is bad..and he has a nasty reoccuring hiss...u need to up ya game up son...and i aint sayin shit outta hate...its all constructive critiscism....1